Make comparisons between data points: The ability to compare different sets of data is crucial for achieving a Band 7 or above. Instead of merely describing the data, focus on comparing the most important points. For example, you can compare trends between different years, categories, or groups. Use comparative language such as “whereas,” “while,” “compared to,” and “in contrast.”
Example:
- Descriptive (weaker response): “The number of car owners increased by 30%, and the number of cyclists dropped by 15%.”
- Comparative (stronger response): “While the number of car owners increased by 30%, the number of cyclists dropped by 15%, highlighting a significant shift towards car ownership.”
Focus on the most significant comparisons: Rather than making trivial comparisons, prioritize those that are important to understanding the data. For instance, if you are comparing multiple categories, focus on the categories that show the most striking differences or similarities.
Example:
- “In 2010, men spent twice as much on leisure activities as women, while in 2015, women’s spending surpassed men’s by 20%.”