While it is important to use a variety of cohesive devices, too many linking words can disrupt the natural flow of your writing. Use them when necessary but avoid starting every sentence with a connector.

Example of Overuse:

“First of all, I would like to inform you that I ordered the laptop last week. Secondly, I would like to say that it arrived late. Also, it was damaged.”

Improved Example:

“I ordered the laptop last week, but it arrived late and damaged. Could you please arrange for a replacement or refund?”