• Variety of Cohesive Devices: The essay uses a wide range of cohesive devices, such as “Firstly,” “On the other hand,” “For instance,” and “In conclusion.” These cohesive devices are used naturally and effectively, helping to link ideas within and between paragraphs.
  • Pronouns and Referencing: Pronouns such as “this,” “which,” and “that” are used to refer back to previous ideas, making the essay more concise and avoiding unnecessary repetition. This helps to maintain the flow of ideas throughout the essay.