Cohesive Devices:

• The transition “On the other hand” contrasts the second body paragraph with the first, signaling a shift in focus to the advantages of urban living.
• “Particularly” emphasizes the focus on healthcare and education, while “For instance” introduces a specific example of urban healthcare services.
• “Additionally” adds another advantage (cultural and social activities), helping to maintain cohesion within the paragraph.

Pronouns and Referencing:

• Pronouns such as “which” and “that” are used to link ideas without repetition. For example, “which can contribute to a fulfilling and well-rounded life” refers back to “cultural and social activities.” This use of pronouns makes the writing more concise and improves readability.