Why It Matters:

• While linking words (cohesive devices) are important for connecting ideas, overusing them can make your writing sound mechanical and forced. The goal is to use cohesive devices naturally and only when they add value to your writing.

How to Use Linking Words Effectively:

• Prioritize Quality Over Quantity: Instead of cramming your essay with cohesive devices, focus on using them when they are necessary to clarify relationships between ideas. Overusing words like moreover, in addition, or however can disrupt the flow of your writing.
• Avoid Starting Every Sentence with a Linking Word: Starting every sentence with firstly, secondly, or in contrast can make your writing repetitive. Instead, vary your sentence structure and use linking words only when needed to connect two different ideas.
• Vary Your Vocabulary: Don’t rely on the same cohesive devices throughout your essay. Instead of always using because, try due to or as a result. This demonstrates a wider range of vocabulary and makes your writing more dynamic.

Tip:

• A good rule of thumb is to use 2-3 linking words per paragraph. Ensure that these words are adding value by clearly linking one idea to the next.