Cohesive Devices:

• The conclusion begins with “In conclusion,” signaling to the reader that the essay is coming to an end. This cohesive device clearly marks the transition from the body paragraphs to the conclusion.
• The use of “while” to contrast the two views further strengthens the cohesion, showing the relationship between the benefits of rural and urban living.

Pronouns and Referencing:

• Pronouns such as “both” and “this” are used to refer back to the two environments (rural and urban areas), summarizing the discussion in a concise manner.
• This helps the reader see the connection between the two viewpoints and the final opinion.